Summertime Summertime
Rain Rain Rain
So much rain it makes me insane
Wet. Wet. Wet. Just stepped in a puddle.
Now I'm getting upset.
Do
Not
Mind
Rain
While
I'm
Inside...
Defineltly Nice. Wintertime. Curled up. Fireplace. Cozy Blankets. Warms the insides.
But Summertime. Summertime? Not. Time. For. Rain.
No. No. No. Flowers need light. Animals need Spring.
I need light. Give. It. To. Me.
Where is the sunshine?
Sunshine. So. Sweet. Sunshine lights the soul. Remember light?
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About Me
- Carolyn
- I graduated from NCC with an Assoc Degree in Liberal Arts. I then attended Queens College of CUNY and graduated with a BA in English/Comp Lit. I took a yr off before attending Molloy in '07. I am a writer, an artist, an avid reader, a student, an employee, a daughter, a granddaughter, a niece, an aunt,a sister and a friend. I'm a Sagitarrius and, we, by default perhaps tend to love life.
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very nice, love the way you decided to space your verse. Keep going girl, maybe next time instead of doing so much at once you could pace yourself? I don't want you to think that you have to do 10 postings at once. And yet I do realize you cannot really control the creative. I enjoyed this very much, good job!
ReplyDeleteI really like this because I felt like I had the same emotions when I think of the words your wrote. I also liked the spacing as well, the periods after each word gave it more effect and emphasis. Great Job!
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